Peer Assessment S1-17 for group S1-13

History of the music video: 

Pros:
- Very informative
- Constant comparisons being made
- Neatly laid out

Cons:
- Be specific (Camera Angles used? How they use it? etc)
- Use more images
- Not enough points being made

Magazine Advert for the Album: 

Pros:
- Has all the requirements
- Easy to read
- Conform to the retro style

Cons:
- Some parts aren't clear enough
- Doesn't suit the artist (Colour)

Goodwin Analysis: 

Pros:
- Good amount of examples (Images)
- Consistent amount of work

Cons:
- Different sized photographs make the layout a little messy
- Would be worth adding criticism when talking about the video
- Expand on points made

Individual Post - 

None found

Auteur Analysis: 

Pros:
- Added examples of what they are analyzing and talking about (videos)
- Neatly laid out

Cons:
- Not said enough about what makes the director an auteur
- Expand on points made

Analysis of 2 abstract videos: 

None found